Friday, October 25, 2013

Descriptive Feature - Japanese Internment Memorial

A waiting line crowded at the entrance of two buses from Tanforan and Pecia to an unknown destination.

Heads are low and shielded with hats or triangular handkerchiefs.

Faces stuck out the small windows and a sign held by one passenger read, “Goodbye, Goodluck, Beat USC.”

Nearby a soldier, with his lip curling upward at the edges, wears a belt with pockets and “MP” initialed on his tricep.

With a partial smile, he hammers dreadful news reading, “Instructions all persons of Japanese ancestry.”

Two old and balding Japanese men look ornery in their business suits as the post is placed.

The same man with the “MP” badge stands still.

He now has one elbow stretching behind his back while the other hand replaced the hammer with a rifle.

His belt pockets are fuller, and his lips now snarl and disgruntle what use to be a peaceful face.

The bus is long gone, but the Southern Pacific railroad, with its large windows, still summons reluctant crowds.

Concerned individuals shed tears with their goodbyes and their faces are no longer hidden as they glimpse at the last time they will see friends and family.

These goodbyes remain permanent on the cold bronze and rectangular memorial, and ironically sits next to a bus and train line of San Jose.


Words: 220







Monday, October 21, 2013

Word of the Week #9

Quixotic 
adjective
exceedingly idealistic; unrealistic and impractical


Sentence word was found in: "A federal appeals court slapped down a quixotic legal campaign against Monsanto's biotech patents this week." (NPR Monsanto article: http://www.npr.org/blogs/thesalt/2013/06/12/190977225/court-to-monsanto-you-said-you-wont-sue-so-you-cant)

My sentence: The football players had a quixotic play at attempting to boost their score.

Thursday, October 17, 2013

Descriptive Feature

The brisk air chilled the dominating statue on an uneven lawn in the quadrant of university buildings.

The aroma of freshly cut grass lingered in the breeze and the morning sun had yet to dry the mushy earth.

Tire tracks from the lawn mower coursed around the statue and stamped mud on a small peach-colored pavement on the statue's perimeter. 

Sapphire blue hexagonal tiles attracted passersby, while flickers of the sun's reflections retained their attention.

"Olympic Project for Human Rights," read the circular button on the frozen athlete's blue jacket, who was standing on the third place platform.

The dark faces with blank stares was permanently imprinted on the two athletes waiting for a reaction from an unknown crowd.

An empty second place platform emphasized the 1968 first and third place Olympic winners Tommie Smith and John Carlos.

Their black-gloved fists held up in the air during the anthem was a human rights salute, and their black ribbed shoeless feet represented black poverty.

The two teammates were once students at SJSU and were suggested to join the game boycott, among other black athletes, to highlight the injustices done to black Americans.

Their actions that once sparked controversy now remains at SJSU's campus on the perennial sculpture.





Monday, October 14, 2013

Word of the Week #8


Sacrosanct
adjective
(esp. of a principle, place, or routine) regarded as too important or valuable to be interfered with


Sentence found in Local Politics textbook: "The idea of home rule, sacrosanct among local governments and a cherish tradition of American local government, remains in perpetual tension with the notion of local governments as creatures of the states and, as we will see, the need to provide regional solutions to regional problems."

Schools and government offices close its doors to honor sacrosanct, religious holidays such as Christmas and Easter.

Friday, October 11, 2013

Mystery Character - Rewrite

"Heaven Sent" read one black banner that wrapped around an outlined Christian cross on his upper left arm.

His deltoid, tricep and bicep tattoos masked his medium-brown skin and was partially covered with extra broad shoulders and a silky, red jersey.


His attempt to grow a small, black bristly beard still didn't hide the fact he still has a baby face with dark, soft eyes and a pointy noise that curves slightly to the left.


He jumped up and down on the sidelines to keep warm and put a bulky, shimmery helmet on before jogging onto torn apart grass to settle behind a long row of bent-over men.


After getting bulldozed by a man twice his size, he got up and squinted his eyes with determination.


The pressure of 70, 207 eyes on him as he makes physically and mentally judgment calls mean he wasn't going to make it happen again.


He looked down at his lower left arm where a white band gave indication on figuring out his step.

After yelling three seconds and men collided with one another, he embraced a brown, elliptical object in his right elbow and his gold legs alternated back and forth as he ran down the field, halting at red turf.


After dropping the brown ball, he looked at a cameraman and curled up a bicep with a fist near his face, almost as if he were going to kiss it.




Thursday, October 10, 2013

Mystery Character

"Heaven Sent" read the banner that stretched around an outlined black cross.

His deltoid and bicep tattoos masked his medium brown skin and was partially covered with extra broad shoulders and a silky red jersey.

His attempt to grow a small, bristly beard still didn't hide the fact he still has a baby face and dark, soft eyes, but regardless, he still has the pressure of 70, 207 eyes on him as he makes physically and mentally judgment calls every week.

He jumped up and down on the sidelines to keep warm and put a bulky shiny helmet on and soon was jogging on green grass to settle behind a line of bent over men.

After getting bulldozed by a man twice the size of him, he got up and squinted his eyes with determination.

You could read his mind. It wasn't going to happen again.

After yelling two seconds, he cuddled the brown leather elliptical object in his right elbow and his gold legs alternated back and forth as he ran down the field, halting at red turf.

After dropping the brown ball, he looked at a cameraman and curled up his bicep with a fist, almost as if he were going to kiss it.


Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Word of the Week #7

vestigial
adjective
forming a very small remnant of something that was once much larger or more noticeable


Sentence found in Local Politics textbook: "The survival of many largely vestigial townships in Illinois suggests that the numbers have something to do with history."

My sentence: A vestigial wave radiated through the valley after the prior night's 6.6 magnitude earthquake.

Thursday, October 3, 2013

Word of the Week #6

Axiom 
noun
a statement or proposition that is regarded as being established, accepted, or self-evidently true

Local Politics textbook: "It is an axiom of politics that those who have power surrender it only when forced to do so by countervailing power."

My sentence: The axiom of eating an apple a day keeps the doctor away is an old wives' tale.

Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Word of the Week #5

Sacrosanct
adjective 
1. (esp. of a principle, place, or routine) regarded as too important or valuable to be interfered with.

"The idea of home rule, sacrosanct among local governments and a cherished tradition of governments as creatures of the states and, as we will see, the need to provide regional solutions to regional problems." 
-Local Politics textbook


My sentence: "The concerned resident's spiel on clean water to the city council was regarded as sacrosanct.


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Fly on the Wall - Extra Credit


Though a Friday afternoon, the noise level was still very much high at the San Jose State Student Union cafeteria. 

Dried and smeared brown sauce and an unused paper-enrobed Panda Express chopstick littered the mustard yellow-colored countertop next to me. 

Blenders from Jamba Juice whizzed at high speeds, and the radio from the same place blared just to keep employees entertained as they cleaned dirty blenders and refilled empty juice containers in between rushes of thirsty customers.

The music's words were just a blur competing against the bass and melody of the tune and myriad of pandemonium of the yellow and blue, Spartan-pride painted room.

For the most part, the lines of all vendors were empty, but there was a father and a 5-year-old blonde girl with pink leggings in the line for a Peach Pleasure and Orange Dream Machine smoothie.

Water pressure harshly pierced inside plastic VitaMix blenders, scraping leftover blended debris of fruit, ice cream, and sugary juices behind the cash register. 

"Oops, sorry" a quiet, high-pitched voice articulated to me after a brush of her backpack tapped my shoulder.

High-timbre beeps in every second intervals in the corner at Subway interrupted my thoughts once again as the alarm warned the sandwich creators the toasting was complete. 

More conversations from study groups and hungry textbook-readers flooded into the cafe.

The deep tonality of dragging plastic against the linoleum floor signaled a cafe worker was nearby sweeping spilled food and trash into a black dust pan. 

"The Ziploc one... the little tiny one..." murmured a passerby with two others who sauntered away.

Beep... beep... beep...

"I thought it was this one," said a female student pointing at a page replete with black and white images.

"No, because I thought it was..." the sentence paused, unfinished, as her group reviewed the assignment once more.

 
Words: 301





Thursday, September 19, 2013

Comaring Media [Newspaper, Radio and Online Articles]

Skepticism wiped the smiles off most Americans on September 16, 2013, as illustrated by various media on the impending topic of “Obamacare.”

It seems many Americans are misinformed or unsure what will happen when open enrollment for health care begins in the next couple of weeks.
 

It was an online article which gave me the information I needed conveniently.

Perhaps I'm just more acquainted with a keyboard and also enjoy listening to music while I read, which I cannot do my while listening to news via the radio or television.

I also use a tablet which I'm connected to most of the time, and I prefer that as a form of entertainment and source of all things.

Though I can listen to music while reading a hard copy of the newspaper, I found it difficult and even a hassle finding a specific paper in the metal box lineup outside buildings (and who carries $1.50 in quarters anymore?).

Most hard copy papers available were either the free ones or in Spanish, and local coffee shops didn't seem to sell them anymore.

Newspapers, such as The Wall Street Journal and USA Today, had a small piece of the skepticism piece on their front page, which lead to a continuation on another.

The Wall Street Journal had access onto the following page, whereas USA Today had readers flipping a few pages before finishing the article.

USA Today had a 4-by-4 inch box on the front page with a total of two columns at 1 5/16 and 2 3/4 inches long and 1 7/8 inches wide.

Inside featured five columns with three half sizes at 4 1/2 inches long and 2 inches wide, and the other two columns were 8 1/4 inches long and also 2 inches wide.

They featured a 4-by-6 inch circle graph with poll percentages and opinion in black and green.

The Wall Street Journal
did not have a graph but instead had an image that was 4-by-5 1/8 inches (they obviously had space to fill, as the image was much larger than it should have been!).

Though both had a different approach with visuals, they both were poll facts and figures on the skepticism of the Affordable Health Care Act, which was very boring to read when it was percentage after percentage.

Radio, on the other hand, has to be interactive, so radio stations must approach stories differently than other mediums.

Instead of reporting a skepticism poll of “Obamacare,” NPR implied there are skeptics using concerned listeners's questions.

This segment was only four minutes and 31 seconds long and was a listener scenario and question with an answer from someone who understood the law.

The problem with this type of medium is timing, as I am definitely not going to wake up at 3 a.m. to catch the “Morning Edition,” yet it is a national radio, so it works for someone in New York City.

Also, NPR has been doing a series of questions and answers for a couple weeks now, which I have missed, so I am not in the complete loop of what has been asked and answered.

Breaking up stories into parts and encouraging to call in and ask questions are how radio stations engages listeners and keep listeners wanting more, but I figured I would just get more questions answered sooner if I checked different online sources.

Online articles varied from 268 words (CBS News), 615 words (The National Memo) and even 1,369 words (Insurance Journal), allowing readers to pick and receive different perspectives in one location.

Though online sources can easily allow for multitasking (and listen to music and not running around looking for a hard copy!), the downside is how easily one can get distracted, but the articles still provided either graphs and pictures or social media and comments to keep the allure.

What both radio and newspapers do not offer are the witty, user comments below an online article.

The user comments are funny, debatable, and sometimes true, which I dub as the new “comic” section from traditional newspapers.

Words: 680

Online articles:

http://www.nationalmemo.com/majority-of-americans-skeptical-of-obamacare-yet-few-want-to-defund/

http://www.cbsnews.com/8301-250_162-57603078/uninsured-skeptical-about-obamacare-poll-shows/

http://www.insurancejournal.com/news/national/2013/09/10/304665.htm

Sunday, September 15, 2013

Word of the Week #4

Vitriolic

adjective
  1. 1.
    filled with bitter criticism or malice.
     
Opinion piece on CNN called Hey atheists, let's make a deal (http://religion.blogs.cnn.com/2013/09/14/hey-atheists-lets-make-a-deal/?hpt=hp_c4). 
"I can’t bring myself to do it because I know just how frustrating and unfair it is when atheists point to the most extreme, vitriolic voices within Christianity and proclaim that they are representative of the whole."
 My sentence: Anonymity brings out vitriolic expressions when it comes to cyber bullying.

Monday, September 9, 2013

My Favorite Writing

Ever ran through a forest hoping to not get killed?
Or be a teenager girl with the hopes of getting a green or yellow Volkswagen bug for Christmas?
Nope.
Never.
But my imagination has with the help of black words printed on ivory sheets of pulp material.

Writing in the first person enlivened what reading meant to me as a freshman in high school.
I hated reading.
I hated book reports, and perhaps the coercive assignments lead toward hating reading in general.
When I read Diary of a Teenage Girl by Melody Carlson (2000), I felt it was my own diary, er, “journal” - I refuse to be acquainted with the tween, frou-frou privacy books.
I could relate to the character so well that when I did begin documenting my life before I turned 15-years-old, I used the book's format as a basis for my writing (and discovered I love parenthesis).
There was nothing particular about the passage, just someone similar in age that allowed time to pass as I read – a rarity at the time.
That moment sprung my love for reading.

Another first person book I read in a matter of days is The Hunger Games (2010) by Suzanne Collins.
Page six reads, “In the woods waits the only person with whom I can be myself.
Gale.
I can feel the muscles in my face relaxing, my
pace quickening as I climb the hills to our place, a rock
ledge overlooking a valley.
A thicket of berry bushes protects
it from unwanted eyes.
The sight of him waiting there brings on a smile.
Gale says I never smile except in the woods.”

Being in the first person allows for more sensory images because the author needs to make the reader become the character, as opposed to reading a scene with sensory details.
Stories like these engage me, challenging my stubborn self to cry or turn the page with excitement because it feels like a personal experience.
Perception is why the first person storyline is my favorite writing.

Word of the Week #3

av·a·rice
noun
  1. 1.
    extreme greed for wealth or material gain.


    Came across this word in a Bill Waterson comic (no title).


    "In a culture that relentlessly promotes avarice and excess as the good life... a person happy doing his own work is usually considered an eccentric, if not subversive."


    My sentence: Kids these days grow up watching young celebrity stars act with no care about humanity and want a similar lifestyle filled with avarice.


Friday, September 6, 2013

Revised Lead: "About Me"

I was freezing falling through a cloud while water droplets formed on my goggles.

Five seconds passed and I could see a teal, Hawaiian coast and was immediately yanked into a seated position. 

I am Brenda Norrie, and I have a knack for jumping off things.

Monday, September 2, 2013

Word of the Week #2

pe·jo·ra·tive

adjective
  1. 1.
    expressing contempt or disapproval.
noun
  1. 1.
    a word expressing contempt or disapproval.


"It's why 'McJob' has been a pejorative term for so long." 

From this article: http://news.yahoo.com/workers-protests-highlight-fast-food-130129184.html


My sentence: "The girlfriend gave a long, pejorative sigh before telling her boyfriend she wanted to break up."


Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Word of the Week #1

  1. Ubiquitous
    adjective
    1. 1.
      present, appearing, or found everywhere.
      "his ubiquitous influence was felt by all the family"


    Though I have heard this word before, and may have also used it in a prior essay, it is one of those words that I rarely use aloud, so I forgot its meaning when mentioned (yet I can easily figure it out in a sentence).


    My MCOM 63 professor, Peter Young, was discussing to the class about submitting files online where he wanted a "ubiquitous format for audio, a ubiquitous format for images, and a ubiquitous format for documents." 


    My sentence: A plaid skirt is ubiquitous dress code for Catholic school girls. 




Friday, August 23, 2013

All About Me

JUMP! ....  JUMP! ....  JUMP!


I am a thrill-seeking jumping addict.


I have jumped off a skyscraper, bridge, and plane for fun. 

Of course I was nervous (who wouldn't be?!).


My favorite of the three is tandem skydiving, but bungy jumping was much scarier! 


I even fell through a cloud on my plane jump... and it was so cold I couldn't even daydream for a second. 

So much for Cloud 9.


You may or may not be surprised that I've done the most random things people scratch their heads over, such as zorbing, trapeze flying, and black water rafting (pretty much cave tubing).



Being active as I am, I need to make sure I fuel my body to outlast anything I abuse it with, which is why I am minoring in Nutrition for Physical Performance. 


I want to be a print Journalist so I can write about it.


My life as an identical twin sister made me competitive, so trying everything there is out there has made me an adrenaline junkie that wants to rock climb, backpack, and try new things (mountaineering perhaps?!).



In my opinion... and of course my boyfriend's... I am the more athletic twin, the smarter twin, and the cuter twin (hehe). 


Though I still have to share a birthday with her, whether or not I like it (I do).


And yes... the infamous question... "Do we look alike?" 


This is very subjective. 

I grew up looking for differences and finding independence, yet when people hear "twin," they automatically look for similarities.

It's like looking at your partner's parents. 

You spot where your partner's nose came from or eye color, etc.


You can tell we're twins, but we have grown to our own individual selves. 


She's taller and a bit bigger, and I have a higher-pitched voice (I've been told), and more casual way of dress.


Being second-born shaped me growing up. 


Someone couldn't quite guess now, but I use to be so shy I had my sister make phone calls for me. 

I hated talking to strangers. 

I used the excuse that she was born first and needed to do things first, so I shadowed her until pretty much my first year in college when we split.


I finally found my independence in 2006. 


It's definitely a journey, but one I am proud of making. 

I have been in and out of school as a result of being on my own, and have found goals and passions I am on my way to achieving.


As I said, I am an active and thrill-seeking competitor, so I would like to compete in body building bikini division. 


It's not the scary women-who-look-like-men type, but rather who looks great in a bikini from lifting weights!