Friday, October 11, 2013

Mystery Character - Rewrite

"Heaven Sent" read one black banner that wrapped around an outlined Christian cross on his upper left arm.

His deltoid, tricep and bicep tattoos masked his medium-brown skin and was partially covered with extra broad shoulders and a silky, red jersey.


His attempt to grow a small, black bristly beard still didn't hide the fact he still has a baby face with dark, soft eyes and a pointy noise that curves slightly to the left.


He jumped up and down on the sidelines to keep warm and put a bulky, shimmery helmet on before jogging onto torn apart grass to settle behind a long row of bent-over men.


After getting bulldozed by a man twice his size, he got up and squinted his eyes with determination.


The pressure of 70, 207 eyes on him as he makes physically and mentally judgment calls mean he wasn't going to make it happen again.


He looked down at his lower left arm where a white band gave indication on figuring out his step.

After yelling three seconds and men collided with one another, he embraced a brown, elliptical object in his right elbow and his gold legs alternated back and forth as he ran down the field, halting at red turf.


After dropping the brown ball, he looked at a cameraman and curled up a bicep with a fist near his face, almost as if he were going to kiss it.




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